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My little dark star
Come and dance with me
Take me to a place
Where reality is a dream

My little dark star
Come and sit with me
Let me wipe your tears away
And bring the light of day

My little dark star
Come and hold my hand
Tell me that you love me
Until the world ends

My little dark star
Come, whisper in my ear
Tell me all your secrets
That no one will ever hear

My little dark star
Please don’t say those things
I do not want your life to end
Because of your cruel dream

My little dark star
How could you leave me here?
All alone I live without you
Because you couldn’t see

My little dark star
I loved you very much
Taking your life hurt me bad
But you’re always in my heart
©2008-2010 ~Steph8888
:iconsteph8888:

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Weird poem out of the blue. I found the first part on my computer and decided to finish it yesterday. let me know what you think!

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:iconsatoru-lover:
that really good!

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Dream the dream of sleep so deep.
Dream the dream that I can't keep.
In the darkness of the night,
You dream of creatures you should fight.
:iconsteph8888:
thanks! I had written the first part and I think I stopped because I couldn't think of anything else. and it just kinda turned into a suicide poem. really weird.

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Dance as if no one were watching
Sing as if no one were listening
Love like you've never been hurt
Live each day as if it were your last
:iconsatoru-lover:
yeah, but things like that always seem to turn out either REALLY crappy, or REALLY good :D you got the good part

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Dream the dream of sleep so deep.
Dream the dream that I can't keep.
In the darkness of the night,
You dream of creatures you should fight.
:iconsteph8888:
LOL, that's true!

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Dance as if no one were watching
Sing as if no one were listening
Love like you've never been hurt
Live each day as if it were your last
:iconsatoru-lover:
:D yup!

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Dream the dream of sleep so deep.
Dream the dream that I can't keep.
In the darkness of the night,
You dream of creatures you should fight.
:iconcrackedcrystal:
wow.
brought atear to my eye.
:iconsteph8888:
thank you! that means a lot

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Dance as if no one were watching
Sing as if no one were listening
Love like you've never been hurt
Live each day as if it were your last
:iconwhatisatowel:
oh... a suicide poem. people are too willing to end it all.

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"That's what she said."
"Who's she?"
"Is she hot?"

-Manifest, Aaron Jones
:iconkmn483:
It gives me the feeling of loving something that shouldn't be loved for some reason..... It's weird man! Why isn't there a creeped out face? ah fear is good enough.

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